Good job! I enjoyed the ending a lot. I think you...

Good job! I enjoyed the ending a lot.

I think you still need to find the right balance between description and action, but that will come with time, and you're already improving on that front.

The ending is still a bit rushed; how did Bob grab his frig and put it in the trunk? Why didn't Muce just stand up after Bob got off him? Just things to think about the next time you write a story.

Your last sentence is also way too abrupt. Imagine if after the entire Harry Potter series had just ended with "And then Harry went back to his life of magic and stuff." You want to end and provide a bit more resolution.

By the way, Blogger doesn't allow indents, so in the future you want to separate your paragraphs with a line of spacing in between them. Skip a line, basically.

Do you want me to write on anything, or are you going to let me off easy on this one =]

Anyways, you can choose any of the books you've recently read to write your book report on. Just make it in depth, hm? Also, don't grind away or get frustrated at it. If you get stumped, just write whatever first comes into your mind instead of sitting there and grasping at straws. Stream-of-consciousness writing is a good way to overcome writer's block.