Wednesday, August 25, 2010

Persuasive on Mosque

This will be a 1000 word plus persuasive about whether or not we should build a mosque at an area next to ground zero.

On September 11th 2001, Muslim terrorists destroyed the twin towers.  Today people are thinking about building the Cordoba House, or the Cordoba House, a place they can worship, over looking ground zero, the place they attacked.  Is that really logical?  I strongly oppose building the Cordoba House next to ground zero for a few reasons.  The reasons are; because it will make people upset, it will strengthen the terrorists, and it will give Muslims more control over our country and lose much of our hard earned freedom.

It will make people upset. More than three thousand people died in the terrorist attack of September eleventh.  Their friends and family would be very upset if we supported those terrorists by building the Cordoba House over looking ground zero.  Many other people would be upset too.  The friends and family of those who were the victims of the September eleventh disaster will post their thoughts on twitter or face book, then it will spread.  eventually, a lot of people would be upset about the Cordoba House and they might exclude Muslims from everyday society.  That's an extreme case.  A more likely outcome would be that most people don't think it's a good idea to help the terrorist's religion, and those people will segregate Muslims.  Either way, it will come out bad.  Building the Cordoba House in America is just like building a mega church in Islam.

Also, building the Cordoba House over looking ground zero will mentally strengthen the terrorists.  They will be sure that they can pass the Muslim religion to America.  Building the Cordoba House leads them to think that just by killing thousands of people, destroying the world trade center (the twin towers), and inciting terror into the lives of average people, that anyone they ask will bend to their every need.  That will give them a better reason to attack America.  It will also give them greater will to terrorize many other countries around the world.  The Muslim terrorists will be cheering and jeering.  Who and what's to blame?  It will be us Americans and our idiocy.  Everyone will be thinking, "Why the heck did we agree to build a mega mosque in our country, especially if it is overlooking the worst terrorist attack ever?"  And once the terrorist know of this conflict with in our nation, they will know that more terror, more bombs, and more death means more control.  And of course, that leads to even more terror, bombs, and death.  All this trouble can be averted by just simply not building the Cordoba House.  We can even save some money.

We will lose much of our freedom to the Muslims if we build the Cordoba House.  When we build the Cordoba House, many more Muslims will come to our country because they know that they will have a place to worship.  That may just sound like me being racist to Muslims, but think about it slowly and carefully.  In many parts of Europe, there is much Muslim car burnings and violence, Belgian police are not advised to drink coffee on some Muslim holidays, women have begun to wear veil to pretend to be Muslims just for protection, and in a few parts of Britain, polygamy and sharia are the laws of the land.  That doesn't sound like the kind of thing that can happen here in America, but that is exactly what the countries of Europe were thinking before the Muslims invaded the land.  The same thing will most likely happen to us if we continue with the plan to build the Cordoba House.  The Cordoba House obviously would not be the only reason that our freedom is lost, the Cordoba House will just kick start the chaos to come.  All this can be avoided if we just stop our not well thought out plans and do not build the Cordoba House.

After all this horror, there must be a valid reason to build the Cordoba House.  There in fact is.  The main reason to build the Cordoba House is to let Muslims be able to practice their religion in America.  But of course, when they are finally able to practice their religion within our borders, they will attract to the US like ants to food.  Then we lose our freedom and become a non free country whose only religion is Muslim.  Another reason to build the Cordoba House is to provide a recreational area for anyone.  There would be an auditorium, theater, performing arts center, fitness center, swimming pool, basketball court, childcare area, bookstore, culinary school, art studio, food court, September 11th memorial, and prayer space.  The prayer space is, obviously, the largest.  At this moment, all this may seem like a wonderful addition to New York, but later, when the Muslims come in and enforce their own rules and laws upon us, we might not even be allowed to use all these wonderful luxuries anymore.  Even if we are allowed to use them, it would be a very small earning relative to the freedom we lose.  It is just like getting paid a dollar to die.  Some people may be looking at this article and thinking, "This Andy Wang person is really paranoid.  Not all Muslims are bad".  That is completely true, besides the paranoid part, and I don't have any objection to the fact that not all Muslims are bad.  But the Muslims that are terrorists are "bad".  That may not be many people, but you can't tell who is a terrorist and who isn't.  You will never know when they will strike.  The terrorists can also persuade a bunch of other people to cooperate due to terror, and the mass of terrorists will get bigger and bigger.  So really, it is not such a good idea to build the Cordoba house anyways.


Right now the Cordoba house may seem like a wonderful building, but it will eventually turn out to be the cause of our loss of freedom and the strengthening of terrorists.  All the good parts of the Cordoba house will eventually seem close to use less.  The building of the Cordoba house is going to be the start of the end for America.

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